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IELTS Essay Hints # Working Women

In the 21st century, with more and more countries gaining freedom, there are more number of women joining the workforce. So, one can find an increased head count of women in companies, as employers, as entrepreneurs or as business heads. Although, some believe it is the best for the world that women start working while others are of the opinion that there are lot of disadvantages with women joining the workforce. Let us today have a look at some of the advantages and disadvantages of working women.

ADVANTAGES –
  1. Smarter Kids – Working women tend to have smarter and more active kids when compared to their counterparts who don’t work. This is because a working women has to move out of the house leaving the house intact. Their kids understand better their responsibility and hence learn simple things faster.
  2. Financial Stability – A working women adds to the family financially. It is beneficial for a family in large as their are less financial issues and kids get the best as parents are able to afford it.
  3. More facilities for kids – When the family operates on money earned by both the husband and wife, there is surely more cash inflow, allowing the kids to be able to join better schools, better extra classes and learn things better.
  4. Inspiration for Kids – A working woman is often a inspiration for her kids. A child learns more from her mother than he or she learns from anyone else. A working woman is very easily able to teach her kids the importance of hard work, of balancing life and staying happy even in tough times.
  5. Freedom – A working woman is more independent than her counterparts. She is free to take her decisions independent of either her parents or her spouse. She knows that her choices and decisions directly impact her and with the freedom to take her own decisions, she becomes more creative and bold.
  6. Increased self-respect – A working women is entirely self dependent on herself and with she struggling with so many other things in life, she gains lot of respect for herself.
DISADVANTAGES –
  1. Health Issues – A working woman has to manage both house and office at equal level leaving her tired and emaciated at the end of the day. This often leaves very less time for the girl to take care of herself, making her more prone to diseases.
  2. More chances of children to fall into bad company – When a child gets more freedom it does makes them responsible. But, in some cases it even leads them to bad company and with working women, it is very difficult to find out what their kids are up to.
  3. Gap Between Kids and Mothers – Due to office work, most mothers are not able to attend their kids parent meeting and hence are not in very touch of their child’s progress. It often leaves them guilty and some children tend to go into stage of depression.
  4. Harassment at Workplace – Working women have to suffer harassment at workplace. It could be sexual harassment or mental harassment, leaving a lot of void in the life of a woman.
  5. More Burden – If a woman finds no helping hand, from her partner, it causes difficulty as she has to work 24 hours without any help, causing drift in the husband wife relationship.

Overall, there are several advantages of working women and if a woman gets a supportive hand from the society and her spouse, things can really be turned into something very beautiful with no disadvantages at all.

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IELTS Essay Sample Answer # Computer Or Teachers

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.

Computers have spread across different areas of our lives and it is possible that soon there will be only computers and no teachers.

 

Discuss.

 

SAMPLE ANSWER – 1

Invention of computers has surely affected the education industry and changed the way teaching and learning is done. They have made the search for information easier and amusing. Not only the information is easily accessible, it is even widely spread out. Crossing the barriers of poverty, distance and language. In today’s time anyone with a computer and internet can access information and learn at their own pace.

The invention of computers and then internet and finally popular search engines like Google, has allowed universities to give away the knowledge much easier. So, one can find video lectures from universities like Harvard, Princeton online. Not only this, with wide spectrum of data present about a particular topic, it become easier to grasp the in depth knowledge about a particular topic. Even more, there are videos on topics like Mahabharata, Math, Science, which makes learning fun.

However, one cannot deny the importance of a teacher in a student’s life. A teacher not only teaches the subject but also deals with the issues of the children in their daily lives, directly or indirectly. A teacher is a person who can help a child to not only expand the knowledge base but also understand life better and make proper decisions,which surely a computer cannot do.

Overall, computers have surely transformed the education industry and things have become much more easier with computers in hand, but the importance of a teacher cannot be understated and they shall be present for a very long time in the education industry.

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SAMPLE ANSWER -2

No doubt that education and the learning process have been tranformed since the introduction of computers. Not only have they made the search for information easier and amusing, with the invention of search engines and internet, data is available and accessible almost everywhere. Though expert systems have made computers human-like, they have yet not become a substitute for human interaction in the learning process. In my opinion, there can be an expected change in the role teachers will play in the education industry in some years, but their are bleak chances of disappearance.

Acquiring knowledge is much more fun and easy with computers and no one can deny this fact. THe mere activity of touching and exploring a computer fills the life of a child with lot of thrill and excitement. Even more, the software interactivity is way ahead of plainly reading the text written on books. At higher level, the availability of digital books, online video tutorials and academic materials provides the student with an every accessible source of information.

However,  the need of human interaction in the learning process will always be present, at least in the foreseeable future. A human is very well versed in finding out the individual needs of a person and help a child shape into a brilliant human being. The expertise of a teacher is not only to make explain the complex concepts but also to share with them experiences that help in the overall development.

With computers becoming more common, it has come down for teachers to be more aware of their roles and ensure that chidren are able to use the technology in a better way. Overall, teachers play a very important role in the classroom, especially  at primary level. No matter how complex the system becomes, there is no way that it can replace the beauty of teaching with human interaction.

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Woman pay and promotion # IELTS WRITING TASK 2

WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:

In spite of many advances women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Write at least 250 words.

ANSWER:

In many regions of the world, women have achieved a social status which is on a par with that of men. Definitely, the credit for this progress goes to their sincere efforts in acquiring the highest educational qualifications and professional skills. Nevertheless, females continue to experience gender discrimination and lack of promotion in workplaces.
Some experts may argue that this issue is never likely to be solved as men’s feeling of being superior than women will always prevail in society. Therefore, this problem can only be minimized and never completely erased. But, in my view, we just have not worked and analyzed the problem enough to claim defeat.
A possible approach would be for the government to compel organizations to follow two rules. Firstly, equal salaries must be paid to all employees for equivalent work. Secondly, the percentage of promoted employees should be equal for both genders. At the same time, regular checkups should be conducted on all tax paying companies to ensure that the measures are strictly followed. This approach appears quite promising. However, the problem is that it would take too long to execute. It can also be seen as an overly excessive measure. Not to mention that big companies could easily fake the data.
A more feasible approach would be for the governments to take the lead and ensure that no discrimination takes place on any of its own grounds. In all government organizations, women must be treated properly and their work must be recognized accordingly. This policy would be more realistic as it would enable the government to grab the problem by is roots instead of trying to yank its stem out along with the roots. In addition, these steps would establish equal payment as an unspoken norm. They would also make the government an ideal role model for other private companies. In fact, countries such as Sweden and Iceland have proven the effectiveness of such measures.
To sum up, it is most likely true that the situation will improve with time but that should not stop us from putting a little more effort so as to solve it quickly or put it to rest once and for all.

 

 

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IELTS Essay # Juvenile Delinquency

Write an essay in about 250 words on “Youth Crime” and discuss the reasons and best possible solutions of the problem.

 

One of the disquieting problems faced by today’s world is – Youth Crime or juvenile delinquency. It is also known as “juvenile offending”. When a minor or individual younger than the statutory age of majority, participates in illegal behavior, then it falls under the category of youth crime. It is highly disturbing that the rate of such crimes is increasing alarmingly. Not only in India but around the globe it is spreading its tentacles to enforce criminal activities which lead to an unstable society. Robbery, rape, drug dealing, murders etc. are some of the horrible faces of youth crimes. In this essay, I will examine the reasons behind this worrying trend and propose some solutions.

Recent psychological studies have revealed that 6-16% of male teens and 2-9% female teens are suffering from conduct disorders which drag youths towards such heinous crimes. These disorders can vary from oppositional-defiant disorder (which may not be aggressive in nature) to antisocial personality disorder. Both of them can develop during childhood. But strangely, only 6% of the youth criminals are habitual offenders.

Another reason behind this increasing rate is the higher aspiration of today’s youth and the desire of a luxurious life. Of course, in case of sexual crimes it is the psychological disorder which is the major reason. Not to mention that nuclear families, education system and highly career oriented parents who do not have time to keep an eye on the moral development of their offspring are some other leading contributors.

The world has to be sensitive enough to deal with this challenge. More juvenile courts are to be established and a stringent law is the need of the hour. At educational institutions, psychological counseling facilities should be available and more attention should be paid on the moral development of children, especially teenagers. Rehabilitation process should be up to the mark. Moreover, youth is the most imperative section of our society so for the unblemished future this generation should be morally uplifted.

To sum up, a combination of factors have made our young minds offenders. However, I believe that if we join our hands together, we can make the world a safer place for everyone.

 

 

 

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