The graph below shows the number of men and women who died because of random disease, in March, during the period of 1999-2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
This graph is a dynamic graph.
- Paraphrase the question-The graph compares the number of deaths caused by a random disease, in Mars, over a period of six years i.e. from 1994 to 2004.
- Body paragraph 1- For the initial two years, the deaths amongst women were higher as compared to men. During the first year, a margin of approximately 4 hundred thousand was marked, however it declined to nearly 200 thousand in the second year. Although men dying of the random disease increased in 2001, a slum was observed in women deaths.
- Body paragraph 2-In the next three years, from 2002 to 2004, the figures in case of both men and women went down, with both the numbers almost levelling out in 2004. With a boom in the deaths of women in 2002, after the dip, the next three years marked a dramatic fall.
- Overview- Over the entire period of time, the number of men and women, dying of random disease, showed opposite trends. Women saw a steady decline till 2000 before slumping in 2001 and booming in 2002, after which marking a considerable decline. While, number of men remained steady till 2002, with slight fluctuations, before ending up at a decrease in 2004.
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