Part Time Jobs # Essay For IELTS

Some people think that young people should be allowed to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?


Education is undeniably the most important thing for an individual. However, in today’s world, mere education is not enough, gaining valuable experience is very necessary to get a good job in future. Most people assert that youths must attend unpaid work in a community to get more advanced experience, while others are of the opinion that it can disturb their education.

Volunteering for a community work brings with it great advantages. Firstly, unpaid work in a curriculum offer better chance for kids to improve themselves in their field. As young, one is energetic, passionate and motivated to learn new experiences and the job can act as an opportunity to involve in a real work force that they are interested in.

Secondly, it provides students a sense of being pivotal in society, which makes them proud and helps them learning the importance of contribution.

Turning to the other side of the argument, studying in advanced level requires abundant of time to concentrate on assignments or exams. Enrolling in unpaid job could seem quite unpractical as even if the student has time, he or she will more likely participate in sports clubs or enroll in additional class. Even more, if students are hell bound to take an unpaid job it could be a hassle and distract them from their responsibility.

Overall, in my opinion, even though attending unpaid jobs could be a hassle in the beginning, but by learning time management, a student can easily take on both and add wings to their career.

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