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IELTS Essay : Restoration of old buildings involves enormous expenditure

November 9, 2024 Anamika

Restoration of old buildings involves enormous expenditure. Some people believe that this money should be used for building new housing structures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample Answer:

Development of a country depends on its quality of infrastructure. It is often believed that finances should be contributed towards the latest construction of brand new buildings, rather than renovation of old places. I will discuss this notion in impending paragraphs and would reach on a valid conclusion

Beginning with, money should be given towards the new structure because of its modernised features. Many individuals want to upgrade their quality of living which is closely associated with the luxury one can afford, which is why people invest in construction of new spaces. Furthermore, these practical features also ensure safety within a space. Modern day kitchen chimneys, stabilisers, fire alarms are a good example of advanced technology that protects one from accidents. To put it clearly, modern time homes are much needed due to the evolution of technology. Also, we cannot neglect that structures such as apartments can accommodate an increasing population.

Alternatively, renovation of a building should be done as it holds cultural and emotional sentiments of a community.Many ancient temples, all over the globe, are not demolished despite its withering condition. Moreover, these places can earn a good revenue, if turned into a tourist spot. Hence, it will not cost a fortune from public funds, and would act as a source of a rising economy. One lucid illustration of this is palaces of Rajasthan, India. The palace owners have integrated with world renowned hotel changes in order to offer royal experience to an individual in return for money. Adding to this, people will have an example of old construction and would be aware of the past.

To conclude, I hold a mixed opinion on this notion because while new establishments will have modern features, we can also not deny that old properties will have emotions attached to it.

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IELTS Essay : Visitors to other countries should follow local customs

November 8, 2024 Anamika

Some believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sample Answer:

In recent times, travelling to international destinations has become a trend. With this a few individuals believe that travellers must follow the local culture of the serving country, whereas, the opposite believes they shall be given the freedom to follow the custom as per their preferences. I will discuss both the viewpoints in impending paragraphs and reach a logical conclusion.

Undoubtedly, following the customs of any local place would diversify the cultural knowledge of an individual as one person can get an in-depth knowledge of the host country’s culture. Resultantly, their perception about its culture would definitely improve. India would be a clear example of this since many global personalities have over the time claimed India to be a culturally rich nation.

Alternatively, freedom of cultural preference should be provided to a visitor for numerous reasons. Firstly, any individual wants to feel comfortable on vacation; if given a choice to follow their personal tradition, one can fully enjoy their leisure time. As a result,only that individual is likely to visit that place again as they felt relaxed and at-home while visiting this country.

In my perspective, following the local customs is much preferable as the visitors will be able to explore more. If they are ready to accept the new culture, local citizens would also take a keen interest in comprehending the cultural references for them.
In conclusion, although it is important to rejuvenate while on a vacation, I believe following a country’s local rituals would enhance one’s knowledge and also make them familiar with local people.

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The given pie charts compare the consumer spending on 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 in the U.S.A.

November 7, 2024 Rimjhim Gaba

Academic Writing Task-1
Question: The given pie charts compare the expenses in 7 different categories in 1966 and 1996 by American Citizens.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
Write at least 150 words.

The given pie charts compare the consumer spending on 7 different categories in 1966 IELTS BAND7 Best Coaching

Sample Answer:
The presented pie charts depict how much proportion of money U.S.A natives had spent on seven distinct categories in two specific years 1966 and 1996.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that food sector was leading in the beginning of the period, whilst cars segment overtook the position after 30 years of time span.

Looking at the details, in 1966, food was the most popular category amid Americans, constituting more than two-fifths of their spending (44%). Almost half of this percentage, customers allocated on cars, making it the second highest on list. In contrast, the lowest expenditure U.S residents made was on computers, accounting at just 1%. Expenses by them on furniture and petrol were nearly one-tenth each. Books and restaurants spending stood at 6% and 7% respectively.

Moving further, after 3 decades, food sector experienced/ underwent a steep decline and amounted to 14%, whereas expenditure on cars rose substantially from 23% to 45%. Interestingly, budget for books dropped to only 1%, while the computer segment had risen dramatically to 10%. Notably, restaurants spending percentage doubled from 7% to 14%. Lastly, the figure for furniture and petrol fell down to 8%. (194 Words)

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IELTS Essay: Computers will be more intelligent than human beings

October 30, 2024 IELTS Research

WRITING TASK 2 Computers will be more intelligent than human beings

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some scientists believe that very soon computers will be more intelligent than human beings. Some people think that this will be a positive development, while others worry it will have negative effects.

What are your opinions on this?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer:

Human civilization has developed at a staggering pace in the last century. We went from not having sliced bread to being on the path to having supercomputers more powerful than we can comprehend. There is indeed a common presumptuous notion out there; that one-day computers might become ‘more intelligent than human beings’.

The amount of ignorance this specific thought conveys leaves me quite inarticulate. Firstly, computers are digital, brains are analogue. There is no conceivable way to compare these two. Computers are highly logical machines designed to perform tasks; humans are essentially a tangled mass of neurons behaving in an unpredictable manner, which births thoughts, emotions and ideas. Their core functions are polar opposites.

The issue that must be addressed is the highly misdirecting role of movies and entertainment media in presenting Artificial Intelligence as ‘self-sufficient’ and ‘intelligent’ in the manner of independent thought processing. One cannot press this enough; but machines will never aim for world domination. They have been created for one purpose and one purpose only, to aid humanity.

The world’s fastest computer averages out at 200 petaflops, the human brain has been estimated to run at one exaflop. The difference between them is akin to the earth and sky. Nonetheless, I do not doubt the gap will be closed within the next decade. However, this will just mean that supercomputers will be more efficient at the analysis tasks they perform, this will not mean that they will spontaneously decide to sprout a conscience and destroy the world in the blink of an eye. This idea is so ridiculous it has passed the point of comedic hilarity into plain oblivion and beyond even idiosyncrasy.

I refuse to even acknowledge such a possibility. Computers becoming more efficient than human processing power would be a leap in the fields of data analysis, weather prediction, space calculation, molecular modeling, natural resource exploration, etc. There is absolutely no cause for worry, fear or panic. Only further awareness on the true nature of computers and the fictionality of popular media tropes.

In conclusion, it is inevitable that computers will become more efficient. There are very little drawbacks to this save for initial job losses, the positives outweigh the negatives in all formulate-able aspects.

Staggering	very shocking and surprising
Comprehend	to understand something completely
Presumptuous	Showing little respect for others by doing things they have no right to do
Notion	a belief or idea
Inarticulate	unable to express feelings or ideas clearly, or expressed in a way that is difficult to understand
Conceivable	possible to imagine or to believe
Misdirecting	to use something in a way that is not right or legal
Petaflops	a unit of computing speed equal to one thousand million million (10¹⁵) floating-point operations per second.
Exaflop	a billion billion calculations per second (10¹⁸)
Comedic	relating to or involving comedy
Hilarity	a situation in which people laugh very loudly and think something is very funny
Oblivion	the state of being completely forgotten
Idiosyncrasy	a strange or unusual habit, way of behaving, or feature that someone or something has
Media tropes	something such as an idea, phrase, or image that is often used by the media
Fictionality	the quality of being fictional (= imaginary)
Inevitable	Certain to happen