IELTS ESSAY : Shopping As The Most Favourite Pastime. Is It Right ?

Writing Task 2: IELTS ESSAY :Shopping as the most favourite pastime.Is it right ?

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.

Write on the following topic:

Shopping is the favourite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that?
Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.


Sample answer:

With the arrival of modernisation, people around the world has developed various hobbies and activities to pursue in their leisure time. The youth has strangely picked up shopping as their favourite pastime. This essay will describe why more youngsters get involved in it and how they can be diverted so that they can utilise their time effectively.

First of all, with the coming of shopping malls and huge media promotions, it is very difficult to not get attracted. People prefer to keep an account of their interests and shop efficiently. For example, my mom is a huge fan of watches. She visits the brands once in a month in search of a good catch. Further, the malls are well equipped with air conditioners and various entertainments so it proves as a resting hub for lot of people.

Irrespective of the bits and fancy eye appealing things, youngsters should look for other rewarding pastimes. For example, they should take up physical activities as a hobby which can help maintain their physical and mental health.

To sum up, shopping is gaining momentum and popularity however youngsters should be given correct guidance and showed the right path.

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