IELTS WRITING TASK-2 ESSAY: Privatization of health care centers.

IELTS Writing Task-2 Essay

Privatization of health care centers.

Some argue that good health is the basic human need, so medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do you think the disadvantages of the private health care outweigh the advantages?

Sample Answer

Healthy people make a healthy society. Both government and private sector are responsible for providing health care facilities. Although many people argue that medical facilities should be given to private companies to handle, I am not in favor that the drawbacks of privatization of medical departments outrank the benefits.

To begin with, the opponents of private hospitals may argue that these are money oriented organisations and their main motive is to earn money by all means. Certainly, health should not be taken care by those people whose main motive is financial gain only. Secondly, these days modern private hospitals are not less than any four or five star hotels. They cater all the luxurious needs of well-off patients. These expensive hospitals and their high class treatments are meant for the rich only. Moreover, private health centers charge a hefty amount that cannot be borne by poor easily.

On the other side, all the governments have to rely on private sector in all major domains such as education, banking and healthcare etc. Considering the increasing number of people who need medical care, privatization of medical sector has become a social demand. First and foremost, private hospitals are providing services almost everywhere. This has been a boon to many people who live in remote areas. Private hospitals have emerged as a life saver for many valuable lives. Another reason is the treatment in private healthcare facilities is quicker than the public hospitals. Furthermore, it has also been seen that the hospitals run by the government lack many facilities. In comparison, private units are fully equipped and efficient service is ensured.

To sum up, privatization of health care is necessary for the betterment of society. However, the government should implement some strict rules and regulations to control the unnecessary demands of private hospitals.

(300 words).

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Few points to improve your formal writing pattern ????????

Few points to improve your formal writing pattern
  • Avoid using short forms like govt. for government, pvt. for private and no. for number
  • Take care of necessary punctuation, if it requires to take a short pause in writing and connectors like, however, moreover, first etc are need to be segregated then we use comma p(,).
  • If demand of the sentence is to take a long pause then we put semi colon (;).
  • Avoid using slangs like chicks for girls and dude for a boy.
  • We do not use informal language as well as contractions in IELTS writing exam like don’t for do not and can’t for cannot.
  • Concentrate on hyphenated words. For example, words like well, self and co generally attract a hyphen.
  • In IELTS writing exam there is no scope for spelling errors. With every spelling error you lose your marks. Don’t forget to check your spellings carefully while revising your essay.
  • Variety of words. In IELTS writing variety of words plays a very important role as it helps you to rewrite your ideas without repetition.
  • Sentence structure: – A good sentence structure is a key to get good score in IELTS writing. Use a wide range of grammatical structures such as Active, Passive, Complex verbs structure.
  • Grammatical accuracy: – A good command of grammar helps you to have more grammatically accurate sentences.

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IELTS CUE CARD: Something you bought but could not use a lot

IELTS SPEAKING TASK CUE CARD:

Something you bought but could not use a lot

  • What it was ?
  • Why couldn’t you use it a lot ?
  • What do you want to do with it now?
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Sample Answer

I am very particular about buying things. I prefer to purchase those items only which I require the most. I can recall one incident here when I bought something out of excitement but later couldn’t use it a lot.

It was my brother’s wedding two years ago. It was the last wedding of my generation. We had all the necessary arrangements done. We had a photographer to capture the moments of the main rituals, however for rest of the events, I decided to shoot myself. Although I am not a professional photographer, I like photography. I spent a huge amount in buying a new DSLR Nikon camera. I used that camera during his pre-wedding ceremonies only and after that I didn’t use it a lot. No such events took place after that where I could show my photography skills. Another reason is that my busy working hours don’t allow me to go for holidays as well where I can capture some moments. I am working in a company where my 24×7 attention is needed. That is why I don’t get enough time to pursue my hobby of photography. I still keep that camera but did not use it a lot.

It’s a pity that I am unable to use it frequently and certainly there is no use of keeping it for a long time. I am planning to gift it to my niece who is also very fond of photography. She wants to pursue a course related to photography after her 12th exam. This camera will be very useful for her. I wish she may continue using it.

(268 words)

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IELTS Speaking Sample Questions # Motivation

Motivation is the most important part of any exam preparation. There are different other aspects as well, but if you are not mentally ready for it, then chances are that, things are not going to happen in your favor. This time we are looking upon how to prepare yourself mentally for the IELTS Speaking exam.

THE MINDSET

Mindset is the most important aspect of preparation, so if you keep your mindset not as someone who is preparing for English. But, rather think yourself as someone who already knows English and is trying to make it better. Once, you do that, there is always a sense of confidence and you are trying to work further on it.

DEAL WITH FRUSTRATION

While one person hesitates because he feels inferior, the other is busy making mistakes and becoming superior. There is nothing worse than getting frustrated with life and taking certain actions that might not be in your own benefits. So, when preparing for the exam, you somehow find yourself feeling demotivated, do not give up. Just try one more time.

LISTEN MORE

Listening to IELTS Speaking is the most important thing to do. So, if you are bored preparing for the exam listen to the podcast. Podcast of anything that you like, listen about your hobbies, listen to interviews, but make sure that you listen to something that is knowledgeable. Because, when you do that you grasp the vocabulary and the way of speaking.

FLUENCY AND ACCURACY

Well, fluency and accuracy are two different aspects of English speaking and have to be practiced separately. So, when you are working on fluency, make sure that you speak a certain number of words in particular time. When checking on accuracy, try to make sure that you use the least number of filler words.

AVOID HYPOTHETICAL SITUATION

Speaking exam has a limited time for you. So, there is no point in beating around the bush! So, when explaining something in your speaking section, speak of something that is from your own memory. Speaking of memory makes it even more interesting for the listener.

MEMORIZE

Although, having template is not something that people appreciate, but we believe that there is always good in preparing some templates for tough situations. For example – I’m not quite sure if that is what you are talking about but I think…”

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