IELTS Essay Sample Answer # Creativity Skills

Creativity is something that changes so many things for people. The way they do things is often different from the way other people present them. This time we are looking at an IELTS essay that talks about how doing enjoyable activities with children often increases the creativity among individuals. You should write at least 250 words.

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

You should write at least 250 words.

SAMPLE ANSWER

Parents throughout the world spend time reading with their offspring to prepare them for school where there literacy rates are developed. However, recent research has suggested that focusing on reading at young age can be detrimental and participating in fun activities can be far more beneficial. In my opinion, the later surely has better effect on creativity than the former.

Reading in itself has no biological age and pushing infants to acquire a skill before they are ready for it, could have detrimental effects on their growth. For instance, when kids are forced to read when they have interest in other things, often leads to they getting reluctant towards reading. However, when children are allowed to take interest in hobbies like arts, literature and games, they often take interest in reading when time does arrive. Through playing, youngsters, develop social and cognitive skills, for example, they are more likely to learn vocabulary through context rather than learning it from book.

In addition, playing is often regarded as something that allows youngsters to mature emotionally and gain self confidence. There are many countries all over the world, who focus on the early years of a child to development of other cognitive skills, and have shown adults who got interested in reading more.

Overall, reading does help the child in many ways but forcing its way to their lives might not be the best approach. Instead, development of overall personality must be the focus in earlier days of children.

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IELTS CUE CARD: A time when someone gave you money as a gift.

IELTS SPEAKING TASK CUE CARD:

A time when someone gave you money as a gift.

  • When it was?
  • Who gave you money as gift?
  • What did you do with that amount?
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Sample Answer

Giving money as a gift has been a part of our culture since long back. We present money as a gift on various occasions to our relatives, loved ones and friends.

One such incident when I received money as a gift was on my birthday. My birthday falls in the month of March. So, just a month back only I got money in the form of a gift. On my birthday, early in the morning, my parents came into my room, flooded me with their precious blessings also gave me an envelope which had Rs 20,000/- in it.

My parents always ask my need and desire for my birthday present. However, surprisingly this year on my birthday instead of asking me about anything. My parents gave me money. It was very kind gesture. It gave me a sense of responsibility to utilise that amount in such a way that I can make them feel proud of their decision of giving me money as a present. They must have thought that their daughter is mature to take care of money wisely.

Initially I was confused how to spend that money as I was not in need of any particular thing. After thinking a lot, I decided to save that money for my future requirements. I always wanted to have a bank account and that amount was sufficient to open a personal bank account. I used that money to open a bank account. When my parents got to know about my decision they were overwhelmed and appreciated me a lot.

(258 words).
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IELTS Writing Task: Organise extra classes for their children

IELTS Writing Task: Extra Classes for Children

Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do? Or do you feel children have enough education at school?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Sample Answer

Nowadays, many parents arrange private tuitions for their children outside the school as they consider that this practice will help their kids to cope with immense education pressure. Not to speak of only parents who are keen to provide extra classes after school hours to their kids, even, schools are also transforming into a full-day study centre. In my views, this practice is causing unnecessary burden on kids.

From last many years education sector has emerged a lot, most schools are not just educated children in the science, languages and mathematics. They concentrate on holistic development of children. Every now and then there are seminars, competitions and extra classes as well as special attention to be given to all the students. These extra-curricular activities always provide great help to students. Additionally, there is a cut throat competition among all the schools to hold the number one position in their city, therefore, they do not leave any stone unturned. They do not show any loop hole in their education system.

However, in some schools due to large number of pupils, teachers are unable to concentrate on each and every student and this search end up by getting additional help from outside. What is more, extra tuitions are always beneficial for weaker students who find it hard to grasp everything related to vast subjects with deeper knowledge in schools. In these cases extra help provided to them after school hours work as boon for them.

To conclude, in few cases children can be benefitted by getting this extra help, studying after school hours, should be encouraged among them. However, pressurising students unnecessarily to get into studies all day is not an ideal idea.

(281 words)

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WRITING TASK: 1- Letter to your friend.

WRITING TASK: 1 Letter to your friend.

Your friend is expecting you to stay with him in two weeks time, but unfortunately you forgot that you have a business trip at the same time.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

  • Apologize and say that you cannot come to visit
  • Explain why you will not be able to visit
  • Suggest another time when you could visit

Write at least 150 words.

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Sample Answer

Dear Tom,
Hope you are doing well. It was great talking to you after such a long time. I was so excited to see you in two weeks time as I promised to you, until I checked my ‘to do’ list. I’m so sorry to inform you that I wouldn’t be able to make it during this time.
Actually, I’ve to attend a business meeting in Chennai and the dates coincide with the days I was supposed to be with you. What happened is that I’ve been under so much work pressure since last few days that this trip just slipped off from my mind. I know, you must’ve started planning already about my visit to your home town but don’t worry I’ll definitely make it soon. What about next month end? We have a long week end coming up from the 27th to 30th.
Just check whether you have any commitments during this time and get back to me. If it works out, it would be a memorable time for both of us. Since our college days, we haven’t really been able to spend much time together as we both got busy with our respective careers. We can go around places which you always told me about your city, enjoy your favorite street food and just talk.
Hope to see you soon. Give my regards to your mom and dad.
Best wishes,
Dave.

(233 words)

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