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IELTS Writing Task Essay # government should spend money on providing faster transport, while others consider that there are other priorities for public transport.

August 29, 2019 IELTS Research

IELTS Writing Task Essay

Some people think that government should spend money on providing faster transport, while others consider that there are other priorities for public transport (example- cost, environment). Discuss both the views and give you opinion?

SAMPLE ANSWER-

There is an ongoing debate related to how the government should utilize the national income of the country on transportation. Some people believe that improvement in the infrastructure of streets and highways should be prioritized by the state while others believe that they should focus more on other sectors of the society. According to me, both conditions must be provided with proportionate attention from the state, as it is valuable for the whole nation.

In this fast paced world, rapid and advanced mode of transportation is more preferred by the majority as it will help improve the overall life quality of the citizens. Improving and getting advanced public transportation will help improve the productivity of the citizens as public transit will get more convenient. Furthermore, faster transport infrastructure will add speed and efficiency to a nation’s progress.

On the other hand, some individuals are of the opinion the government to primarily focus cost effective and eco-friendly public transport. They should prioritize issues related to vehicular pollution and cost efficiency of public transport rather than public transport advancement. In fact, the government of India came up with the idea of ‘Smart Cities’ with the program to build efficient ecofriendly public transportation and walkable spaces for the pedestrians as well. Therefore, by building more cost-effective transport for the public, the state can invest in other essential sectors of health and education.

In a nutshell, I believe that the government should focus on improving the quality of public transit. But the authorities should not ignore other important sectors that demand their attention and national income of the nation.

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IELTS writing task # What are the pros and cons of buying food rather than cooking food?

August 29, 2019 IELTS Research

IELTS writing task

What are the pros and cons of buying food rather than cooking food? Give ideas about which is a better way according to you and why?

SAMPLE ANSWER-

Modernization has influenced people’s way of maintaining a lifestyle. As modern working lives are getting busier, individuals tend to have less time to prepare a full cooked meal for themselves and their families. People buy food from outside as they do not get time from hectic schedules for cooking meals. However, purchasing food from the market has its own benefits and drawbacks.

Readymade or processed food is gaining immense popularity mainly because of the convenience provided by it. Purchasing food from outside saves time. The market has healthier options these days to choose from. For example, many outlets like ‘Subway’ mention the calories of food item therefore, people can choose accordingly. In fact, eating readymade food helps one to manage time more efficiently.

On the contrary, consuming food from the market has its own drawbacks. They can be expensive and heavy on the pocket as well. Food for the market is an unhealthy option as readymade food is oily and high in fat content. Furthermore, market food is low in nutritional ingredients and they are many cases in which processed food causes food poisoning. At times the ingredients are not fresh as the producers focus more on the appearance of the food rather than its freshness.

To conclude, though people today are occupied in their busy working schedules, they should take out time to prepare meals at home. In my opinion, eating readymade food can be regarded as a treat for the employed adults occasionally but the advantages of home-cooked food outweigh those of readymade and processed food.

(258 words).

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Essay # Some parents believe that reading books for entertainment is a waste of children’s time.

August 15, 2019 IELTS Research

IELTS Writing Task # Essay

Some parents believe that reading books for entertainment is a waste of children’s time. They think that their children should read only serious educational books. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

SAMPLE ANSWER-

With increased competition, children’s interest in reading has dramatically reduced. Parents want their children to only read course related books as they will help improve their grades. While some agree that children should read books according to their interests. In my view, both entertainment and educational books are important to increase a child’s knowledge regarding various aspects of life.

Many studies show that toddlers and school children who read according to their interests have a larger vocabulary and wider knowledge. Reading books of different genres helps children get to know their field of interests. In fact, painting and coloring books can develop a child’s interest in arts and other creative fields. When a child reads novels, short stories or fiction, it helps them to enhance their creative skills and imagination power. Hence, children will get valuable life lessons if they read regularly as they will not be restricted with limited knowledge related to the syllabus.

From the opposing point of view, with growing competition worldwide, parents want the best for their child. So they encourage children to read educational books which is beneficial for their career advancement. From the parent’s point of view, books related to the curriculum helps children fetch a higher score thereby securing their future.

In a nutshell, reading enhances a child’s memory and helps them to improve their concentration level and develop the overall personality. Instead of pressurizing their offspring to read curriculum books, parents should motivate children to read and engage in entertainment books thus keeping a balance.

(253 Words)

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Essay # Employers should give longer holidays to employees in order to encourage them to do their job well.

August 14, 2019 IELTS Research

IELTS WRITING TASK ESSAY

Employers should give longer holidays to employees in order to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree or disagree?

SAMPLE ANSWER-

The productivity of the employees is essential for the growth of a business or company. In today’s corporate life, there is a lot of workload that employees undergo due to they seldom get time for longer holidays. Providing longer vacations to professional workers would increase their productivity. I agree with the given statement as it helps workers be more refreshed and inspired to work.

Numerous studies have shown that job stress has detrimental effects on workers’ health and well-being. These days, due to excessive work pressure many employees compromise their holidays in order to perform certain tasks. It not only has a negative impact on their personal lifestyle, but they also their social life. A longer break will help people to get rid of their dullness and return to work fresher and more energetic. In fact, European countries like Norway has high happiness rating because they follow this practice in which they provide employees with two to three weeks vacations called ‘fellesferie’ leaving businesses closed for that time period.

However, every coin has two sides and keeping aside all the advantages, giving longer holidays to the employees may adversely affect their work schedule. Taking long vacations includes cutting off from work completely. It will interrupt the smooth functioning of the business thereby disturbing the economy of that nation as well. Many companies face economic crisis during long festive or summer breaks.

Coming to an outcome, I can say that though longer holidays for workers can help motivate them and improve their efficiency, giving frequent holidays might result in their lack of interest in their job therefore, a balanced need to be maintained.

(272 Words)

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