Category: IELTS Writing

Writing task 2

Which is more important while choosing a company to work – higher salary or good working atmosphere

 

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:
Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer

Nowadays, jobs have become very demanding in terms of performance and involvement. People have to work to earn a living at any cost. However, selecting a job and the workplace entirely depends on an individual’s value systems. Every person aspires to fulfill different needs to achieve satisfaction in life. Some people think that salary is the predominant motivational factor in a job whereas others think that a congenial working environment is more valuable. I will discuss both the views in my essay.

People usually look for a job which offers a high pay scale. So that, they can maintain a luxurious life style. Moreover, they believe that money can buy everything to gain happiness. A job with high remuneration is also an indicator of success and advancement. As a result, employees do not mind devoting extra time to their jobs to gain promotions and increments .A person having high  income not only has more savings but high purchasing power as well. Additionally, higher salary is also required to spend on possessing luxurious things to build a high social status.

On the other side, some people opt for a job providing a better organisational culture and climate. There are employees who can forego monetary benefits but cannot compromise with their peace of mind. They believe in maintaining a healthy work-life balance, so that they can perform better at the workplace along with spending time with their loved ones. For such people, satisfaction in personal and professional lives are equally important to remain happy.

To conclude, in my opinion, a job with a higher salary may increase our wealth, but adversely affects our physical and mental health. People find happiness in materialistic things, ignoring the fact that happiness is actually a state of mind. Possession of money and power does not guarantee a life full of peace and happiness.

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Academic Writing task 2

Online Courses Vs Regular Courses

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

‘In today’s world, some prefer online courses whereas others prefer classroom teaching’

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer

There always exists a relationship between education and socialisation to advance the cognitive development of an individual. Nowadays, education has become technology driven and easily accessible. Some people prefer classroom learning while others favour online courses. Both the online and classroom classes have their own advantages and disadvantages. Suitability and selection of a course depend on an individual’s choices and circumstances. There are valid opinions to weigh both the sides of the discussion, which I will consider in the following paragraphs.

On one hand, classroom learning promotes the social, emotional and psychological development of the students as they learn together in a group. As a result, students develop skills of team building and group dynamics through mutual interaction and discussions in the classroom. In colleges and schools, classes are collaborative and more interactive. There is a two-way communication between the teacher and learners to understand concepts better. Moreover, it also supports participation and immediate feedback.

On the other hand, in online classes we can take the lectures conveniently anywhere, without travelling to campus. We get the facility to attend the classes anytime due to the option of flexible classes.  Online courses are comparatively cheaper as there is less fees and no transportation and stationary costs are involved. Virtual classes are suitable for those who are working and are unable to attend the regular classes.

Overall, in my view, classroom teaching is better than the online classes. This is primarily, because, the knowledge cannot be imparted in the same way to different types of learners. Different students have different levels of perception and understanding. Students get personal attention of the teacher in the classroom. It further helps the teacher to understand the potential and personalities of the students to teach them accordingly.

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