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IELTS Essay # Juvenile Delinquency

Write an essay in about 250 words on “Youth Crime” and discuss the reasons and best possible solutions of the problem.

 

One of the disquieting problems faced by today’s world is – Youth Crime or juvenile delinquency. It is also known as “juvenile offending”. When a minor or individual younger than the statutory age of majority, participates in illegal behavior, then it falls under the category of youth crime. It is highly disturbing that the rate of such crimes is increasing alarmingly. Not only in India but around the globe it is spreading its tentacles to enforce criminal activities which lead to an unstable society. Robbery, rape, drug dealing, murders etc. are some of the horrible faces of youth crimes. In this essay, I will examine the reasons behind this worrying trend and propose some solutions.

Recent psychological studies have revealed that 6-16% of male teens and 2-9% female teens are suffering from conduct disorders which drag youths towards such heinous crimes. These disorders can vary from oppositional-defiant disorder (which may not be aggressive in nature) to antisocial personality disorder. Both of them can develop during childhood. But strangely, only 6% of the youth criminals are habitual offenders.

Another reason behind this increasing rate is the higher aspiration of today’s youth and the desire of a luxurious life. Of course, in case of sexual crimes it is the psychological disorder which is the major reason. Not to mention that nuclear families, education system and highly career oriented parents who do not have time to keep an eye on the moral development of their offspring are some other leading contributors.

The world has to be sensitive enough to deal with this challenge. More juvenile courts are to be established and a stringent law is the need of the hour. At educational institutions, psychological counseling facilities should be available and more attention should be paid on the moral development of children, especially teenagers. Rehabilitation process should be up to the mark. Moreover, youth is the most imperative section of our society so for the unblemished future this generation should be morally uplifted.

To sum up, a combination of factors have made our young minds offenders. However, I believe that if we join our hands together, we can make the world a safer place for everyone.

 

 

 

IELTS Essay Sample Answer # Class

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.

These days, many children have difficulty paying attention and concentrating in their classes at school.

What are the reasons for this?

How can it be dealt with?

Write at least 250 words.

In recent times, teachers have observed that children are less likely to pay attention in the class. This has resulted in a decrease in the quality of teaching methods, as often teachers believe that their efforts are being wasted.

One of the major reason for this is the growing market of coaching classes. Most of the students take tuition classes for the subjects, being taught. This creates an environment, that no matter what the teacher is teaching, they will learn it later on in the coaching class. To solve this problem, the quality of teachers must be improved and also a belief must be brought among them, that school education is enough for them to do well in life.

Another reason for the distraction among children is that, teachers are now not allowed to take strong disciplinary actions. As a result, often children do whatever they want to, because they know the limits of the teacher. Even more, researchers believe that this might be possible because of the unhealthy diet that people are taking. The issue can be solved by allowing teachers to take more strict actions, and yet maintain a limit. Also, parents must take proper care on what the children are eating.

Overall, children are facing issues in concentrating in class because of lack of discipline or more faith in coaching classes. However, if proper time and consideration from teachers and children are given, it is possible to bring back children attention in class.

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IELTS Writing Sample Answer # Lack Of Water

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.

A serious problem affecting people right across the globe is lack of water for drinking, washing and other household purpose.

Why do many countries face water shortage, and what could be done to solve the issue?

SAMPLE ANSWER

Water, in present times, has come up as a great issue, with most of the countries across world facing shortage of water. Although in present times, most people do have water, the day when one will have to fight for water are not far.

One of the major reason for the water shortage is, people often tend to waste water. For instance, it is a common sight to see people leaving the tap open while brushing teeth or cleaning face. Even more, some people tend to wash their clothes in river water leaving the water dirty and of little use in later. To solve this problem, the government could bring more awareness among people regarding the importance of water. Even more, the people in their daily routine, must take steps to save water.

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Another reason for the scarcity of water is the unequal distribution of water. It has been seen that, the water supply to the minister and other celebrities is more regulated than to the common person. As a result, the poor is often left with no water or very little water for day to day use. The problem could be addressed by supplying more water to the poor, equalising the amount of water among all.

To sum up, although it is clear the world is facing an acute problem, it is undoubtedly possible to start to tackle these issues, and improve the quality of life. Governments and local councils must take the lead in dealing with the issue, otherwise life will only get worse in the future.

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Prevalent Stressful Jobs # Essay For IELTS

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.

In today’s world more and more people are working longer and taking up more stressful jobs. What causes this? How can employer’s make the workers life easier?

Write at least 250 words.

 

In today’s world, life has changed significantly. With the market becoming more competitive, people are forced to work more and take up stressful life in order to cope up. Some people assert that this issue has become the serious topic in the modern world, leaving people emaciated and more materialistic.

The main reason behind it is that the number of younger graduates have increased dramatically these days, but unfortunately the employment rate is still almost the same as the last ten years. As a result, if workers want to keep up with their jobs, they need to work more and keep up with their knowledge and skills to be more professional, otherwise they will be fired or would be forced to quit.

Secondly, the dependence on technology has made people live more stressful lives. Having the technological devices, it means that people can work remotely and have to hold their work responsibilities all the time. This means they need to answer phone calls or emails without any excuse, even during holidays.

However, there are certain steps that can help to tackle the issue.  Firstly, organizations must provide training to the employees about some useful strategies for their work and educate them about how to manage work effectively will definitely help workers to be more productive in their performances and also save their time. Secondly, offering stress management sessions should be provided.

Overall, the phenomenon of working more is prevalent and cannot be avoided but it must be made sure that one maintains a balance between their work and life.

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