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WRITING TASK 1: The proportion of males and females in India.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar graph below shows the proportion of males and females in India during 1950-1990.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 

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Sample Answer

The given bar graph illustrates the number of males and females in India from 1950 to 1990. Over the period of 40 years, the total number of population has drastically increased.

As we can see from the data,the population of females was greater in 1960 than in 1950, whereas, the population of males was higher in 1990 than in 1980. Before 1970,the population of females was higher than the male population,whereas, the population of both males and females has reached at par in 1970. Thereafter, the population of males has started increasing at an increasing rate and reached at a level of 36 crores in 1980.Additionally, As per the records, the population of India has doubled over 40 years.

From 1950 until 1990, the graph suggests that the sex ratio in India has considerably declined due to different reasons.It is also clear that, initially the female population in India was higher than the male population, which had completely reversed during the given period.

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Writing Task 1: Indian Retail Industry

Pie chart is a type of graph in which a circle is divided into sectors that each represent a proportion of the whole. These charts are best preferred when comparing different sub-categories or to represent the whole of the entire situation. This time let us have a look at a sample answer that compares two pie charts and summarizes the information required.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts below show the distribution of the market share of different segments in Indian Retail Industry from 2010 to 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
INDIAN RETAIL INDUSTRY

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Sample Answer

The two pie charts compare the distribution of segments in the Indian retail sector during 2010 and 2015.

The significant segments for the retail sector in India were clothing and textile comprising  approximately 40% of the total market share. Whereas footwear and other sectors were the minor contributors in the Indian retail industry.

As we can see, clothing and textile consisted of 37% in the first year and showed an insignificant increase of only 3% in 2015. On the contrary, in 2010, the proportion of food and beverages fell marginally to 18% in 10 years.

With reference to the market share of the other two constituents of retail industry,there was an approximate 4% growth in consumer durable whereas, footwear segment rose by 2%  in 2015.On the other side, the market share of other segments declined by 5% in 2015,by 17%v to 12%.

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Writing Task 1: A letter to the manager of the hotel.

Writing Task 1

You have recently stayed in a hotel and after returning back you realise that you have left a piece of clothing at your hotel room. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

In the letter, you should:

  • Explain the clothing.
  • Say where you left it.
  • What the manager should do if he/she finds out.

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Sample Answer

Dear Sir,

I am Amandeep Singh and I am writing to inform you about a piece of cloth which I left in the hotel room. I had booked room no. 2100 in your hotel. I and my friend stayed there for two days i.e., from 02/01/19 to 04/01/19.

Today, while unpacking my clothes, I noticed that a piece of clothing was missing in my luggage. I realised that it was a white colour formal shirt with black buttons, which I forgot to pack before leaving the hotel room. Probably, I left the shirt in the wardrobe inside the room. The shirt is very close to my heart as it was gifted by my mother on my birthday.

I called the receptionist and informed her about the same. But, she refused to help without your consent and asked me to first report the matter to you. Therefore, I request you to look into the matter at your earliest convenience .By any chance, if you find the shirt kindly send it to my residential address.

I appreciate your quick response.

Yours Sincerely

Amandeep Singh

Sample Answer Two:
Special thanks to Akash Gautam for the contribution of this answer.

Dear Sir,

This is in regard to seek your help in finding one of my belongings which I, unfortunately, left at your hotel during my stay.

I was at your place a fortnight ago and my stay lasted for seven days. Though everything looked fine during my checkout from your hotel; however, when I reached home and unpacked my suitcase, I realized that I forgot my tuxedo in the hotel room assigned to me; room number is 301. As for the suit, it is a black colored tuxedo which is wrapped up in a black and gray colored cover. Also, I vividly remember that it was placed in the wardrobe inside the room.

It is imperative for me to get my piece of clothing as soon as possible because firstly, it is quite expensive and secondly, I need to wear it in an imminent family function on the first week of next month. Therefore, I request you to look into the matter at your earliest convenience. Kindly send the suit to my residential address present in the attached envelope; I would bear the complete postal charges.

I appreciate your quick response.

Yours sincerely
Johny

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Writing Task 1: Information Letter

Writing Task 1

Write a letter to the manager about the important documents which you left in their taxi.

In the letter, you should:

  • Where you left it
  • Why it is important.
  • What you want the manager to do.

 
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Sample Answer

Dear Sir,

I am Rohit and I am working as a general manager in ABC Company based in Noida. I am writing to inform you about the important documents I left in your taxi. Yesterday, I took your taxi from Noida to Delhi airport at 3 p.m.

Today, when my sister asked for my pan card, I noticed that I have lost the folder of my personal documents. I tried to search everywhere at home but could not find them. After pondering upon for almost an hour, I realised that while travelling to Delhi airport, I left those personal documents in your taxi (DL01 AA 2345).

I immediately contacted the taxi-driver but his phone was not reachable. Furthermore, when I contacted your representative, he denied for any kind of support.

Kindly look into this matter on urgent basis and do the needful as these documents are really important for me.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely

Rohit

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