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Writing Task 1: Indian Retail Industry

Pie chart is a type of graph in which a circle is divided into sectors that each represent a proportion of the whole. These charts are best preferred when comparing different sub-categories or to represent the whole of the entire situation. This time let us have a look at a sample answer that compares two pie charts and summarizes the information required.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts below show the distribution of the market share of different segments in Indian Retail Industry from 2010 to 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Sample Answer

The two pie charts compare the distribution of segments in the Indian retail sector during 2010 and 2015.

The significant segments for the retail sector in India were clothing and textile comprising  approximately 40% of the total market share. Whereas footwear and other sectors were the minor contributors in the Indian retail industry.

As we can see, clothing and textile consisted of 37% in the first year and showed an insignificant increase of only 3% in 2015. On the contrary, in 2010, the proportion of food and beverages fell marginally to 18% in 10 years.

With reference to the market share of the other two constituents of retail industry,there was an approximate 4% growth in consumer durable whereas, footwear segment rose by 2%  in 2015.On the other side, the market share of other segments declined by 5% in 2015,by 17%v to 12%.

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Writing Task 1: A letter to the manager of the hotel.

Writing Task 1

You have recently stayed in a hotel and after returning back you realise that you have left a piece of clothing at your hotel room. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

In the letter, you should:

  • Explain the clothing.
  • Say where you left it.
  • What the manager should do if he/she finds out.

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Sample Answer

Dear Sir,

I am Amandeep Singh and I am writing to inform you about a piece of cloth which I left in the hotel room. I had booked room no. 2100 in your hotel. I and my friend stayed there for two days i.e., from 02/01/19 to 04/01/19.

Today, while unpacking my clothes, I noticed that a piece of clothing was missing in my luggage. I realised that it was a white colour formal shirt with black buttons, which I forgot to pack before leaving the hotel room. Probably, I left the shirt in the wardrobe inside the room. The shirt is very close to my heart as it was gifted by my mother on my birthday.

I called the receptionist and informed her about the same. But, she refused to help without your consent and asked me to first report the matter to you. Therefore, I request you to look into the matter at your earliest convenience .By any chance, if you find the shirt kindly send it to my residential address.

I appreciate your quick response.

Yours Sincerely

Amandeep Singh

Sample Answer Two:
Special thanks to Akash Gautam for the contribution of this answer.

Dear Sir,

This is in regard to seek your help in finding one of my belongings which I, unfortunately, left at your hotel during my stay.

I was at your place a fortnight ago and my stay lasted for seven days. Though everything looked fine during my checkout from your hotel; however, when I reached home and unpacked my suitcase, I realized that I forgot my tuxedo in the hotel room assigned to me; room number is 301. As for the suit, it is a black colored tuxedo which is wrapped up in a black and gray colored cover. Also, I vividly remember that it was placed in the wardrobe inside the room.

It is imperative for me to get my piece of clothing as soon as possible because firstly, it is quite expensive and secondly, I need to wear it in an imminent family function on the first week of next month. Therefore, I request you to look into the matter at your earliest convenience. Kindly send the suit to my residential address present in the attached envelope; I would bear the complete postal charges.

I appreciate your quick response.

Yours sincerely
Johny

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Writing Task 1: Information Letter

Writing Task 1

Write a letter to the manager about the important documents which you left in their taxi.

In the letter, you should:

  • Where you left it
  • Why it is important.
  • What you want the manager to do.

 
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Sample Answer

Dear Sir,

I am Rohit and I am working as a general manager in ABC Company based in Noida. I am writing to inform you about the important documents I left in your taxi. Yesterday, I took your taxi from Noida to Delhi airport at 3 p.m.

Today, when my sister asked for my pan card, I noticed that I have lost the folder of my personal documents. I tried to search everywhere at home but could not find them. After pondering upon for almost an hour, I realised that while travelling to Delhi airport, I left those personal documents in your taxi (DL01 AA 2345).

I immediately contacted the taxi-driver but his phone was not reachable. Furthermore, when I contacted your representative, he denied for any kind of support.

Kindly look into this matter on urgent basis and do the needful as these documents are really important for me.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely

Rohit

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Writing task 2: Old Versus young generation

Writing task 2

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In some countries old people are highly valued and in other countries the young are considered to be more valuable.
Discuss both view points and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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Sample Answer

In last few decades, the trend has shifted from joint family to nuclear family. Nowadays, children don’t prefer spending time with their grandparents as they happy to have internet and smartphones. These changes in the society has led to an apparent discrimination between the old and the young. In some countries old generation is exceptionally important whereas, in other countries the new generation holds more significance. I will discuss about both the views in my essay.

On one hand, due to the rise in dual income households, the role of elderly people has also increased. Working parents can leave their children in the custody of the grandparents. This way they can help their children to learn the right values and morals which is impossible with the maids and servants. Additionally, old people are the stewards of the culture and traditions of a country which they transfer to the next generation. They also help in fostering capable young individuals by sharing their knowledge, skills and experiences with them.

As we know, old generation usually resists changes which inhibits them exploring and learning new things. On the contrary, young people are quite acquisitive and believe in change .Therefore, they contribute a lot to innovations and inventions. The youth are the  power behind the nation building and development because they are very energetic and ambitious. In addition to that, they don’t believe in discrimination on the grounds of race, colour, language and gender. Today’s youth is capable of challenging and changing the age-old customs and traditions of a country, in spite of following them blindly.

To conclude, the attitude of different generations towards work and life, defines their behaviour towards each other. Certainly, the youth of today are the future of tomorrow. Nevertheless, the society would become incomplete and uneven without the existence of old people. Therefore, old and experienced people are indispensable to nurture the society as they hold the culture and traditions of a country strong and alive.

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