IELTS Essay Sample Answer # Work And Technology

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Technology has changed the way people work. Discuss
Write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer One

With computers in our hand, highly skilled individuals at our workforce and every day inventions that are changing the way that we work. Technology has surely made a great impact on the way we work. There are opinions that technology is destroying the middle class and ultimately many jobs. However, people believe that technology is making lives easier allowing people to focus not only on their work but maintain a healthy lifestyle.

There has been a shift in the kind of jobs that people used to do in the past decade. From times, when organizations required people who could put their data into a register, maintain the register. A skilled workforce is required that knows how to operate on computers, better if they know database. Even more, with everything coming online, there is a huge demand of people who can do online jobs. So, one can find jobs like content writer, editor, fashion designer and so much more online.

Even more, technology has allowed people to work for their own. For example, there have been individuals like Gursimran Khamba, Tanmay Bhatt and many others who have earned well off by putting their art online. Also, with technology people have gained much more freedom with respect to work. More and more people now work from home allowing them to balance both their work and life.

Overall, technology has surely changed the way people work. With more sophisticated software becoming easily accessible to individuals, work has become easier and more flexible. However, there have been people who have lost their jobs to technology, the ones who were able to change and learn working with automation have gained success. (276 Words)

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Sample Answer Two

Technology is the application of science and in the past few centuries we have been able to invent some of the best technologies that have changed the way things are done. From the way we work to the way we relax technology has surely entered every sphere of our life, mainly affecting our work. Although, it has made our lives easier, there have been many unskilled or low skilled jobs that have been lost for technology.

Technology is almost everywhere in our workplace from fax machines to the printers. We require technology for almost everything. From days when everything was stored in hard copies, we have moved into time when everything information is stored in databases. Organizations demand for individuals who know, how to use them. The farmers need not to plough the entire field on their own, but they can easily do it with the help of tractors.

Even more, with space technology becoming so efficient, it has become more easier for us to predict the simple of things like weather, allowing people to plan things accordingly. Invention of internet has connected everyone around. A company is now able to operate from different geographical spaces and yet stay connected. People are not defined by their work space and can easily work from the place and time that they want to.

In conclusion, just like industrial revolution, the advancement in technology has transformed many jobs, requiring a completely new skill set as compared to earlier times. While many have changed themselves to fit into this new technical world, others have resented and just like always the one who changed have gained more success.(273 Words)

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IELTS Essay # Subjects You Love

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like.
Others believe that they should be only allowed to study subjects that are useful in future, like science and mathematics.
Discuss both views and give your opinions.


The above question has been asked in a latest IELTS academic writing section 2. The most important part of answering is understanding the question. So, first thing first, understand the question. What is it talking about? There are people who believe that we should study subjects that will earn us money while others believe we should study subjects that we like. Now, you are supposed to talk about both the views and then give your opinion.

The best way of answering a question like this would be to figure out the points you will be saying for both the opinions. When that is done, you are set to write your essay and get that perfect band that you want.

Points

  1. Certain courses like, engineering, information technology offer more job opportunities and better salaries than other jobs.
  2. On society level, certain jobs are considered to be more respectable than others.
  3. Focus on technology in higher education leads to new invention, economic growth and greater future prosperity.
  4. Society benefits best when people do what they love.
  5. Certain aspects like creative thinking, knowledge on history, arts helps person for all round development.

Sample Answer

People have different opinions about the choice students should have with regard to the subjects they choose for study at university. While some argue that it would be better if students be forced into certain key subject areas, there are opinions stating a person should be allowed to do what they love the most. I believe, a society can truly succeed when every individual does what they love.

There are various benefits for directing the students towards areas like technology, computers, science, medicines etc as they are likely to be more beneficial than certain art degrees. With so many companies being technology centric, there are more career opportunities and job progression, better salaries and hence improved life style for people who take them. On society level, by forcing people into certain areas, governments can ensure the knowledge and skill gaps be filled in the economy. Even more, it helps in new inventions, economic growth and greater future prosperity.

In spite of these arguments, forcing a student towards a certain area merely because of better economic growth is less likely to bring in the required benefits. In my opinion, a society benefits from people who are passionate about learning. Even more, it is not possible to predict what areas of study will be beneficial for the society in long run. Allowing an individual to follow their passion allows them to do the things in a perfect way and bring about change in the world.

In conclusion, although it seems practical and sensible for universities to give more preference for certain subject, I prefer the freedom to lie within an individual on the choice of subjects. (274 Words)

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IELTS Essay # Exploitation Of Children

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
Children are being exploited all over the world, for beggary, found in harmful factories and in unhealthy situations.
Discuss.
Write at least 250 words.

The world has progressed in the past few decades but there are certain aspects we still lag behind. One of them is child labour and has been an international concern for a very long time. It damages, destroys and spoils the future of children. However, the number has yet not declined to be ignored. Children are not only found in factories, trafficked, and forced to beggary but often deprived of the basic requirements.

Child exploitation is a major issue in the developing and under developed part of the world. With the countries facing acute poverty, the families are forced to send their children for work in hope of more money. Even more, with the increased crime rate children are easily kidnapped, trafficked and often forced into beggary. In some cases, they are first ill-treated, like their body parts are damaged ensuring they look like beggars. These children not only have to suffer from ill treatment but also the loss of a lovely family.

 

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In case of girls, it has been observed, that they are kidnapped and forced into prostitution, damaging their minds forever. Some are married off by the family members for dowry and in other cases, made sex slaves by their own family members.

Even more, children are being forced into work in factories, like, cracker factory, chemical factory, which are dangerous for their health giving them serious health issues for entire lives. Often a child who has been forced into labor, molds the personality of the individual, making them lose faith in society and good things. As a result, children often end up taking drastic steps like murder, robbery etc. when they grow up.

Overall, child labour is a serious concern and should be dealt with an urgency to make sure that there are no more children who are forced into labor work. It could mean bringing up more schools or making sure that there are jobs for parents or declining crime rates. (325 Words)

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IELTS Essay # Poor Urban Life

You should spend 40 minutes on this task.
More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, and life in cities can be extremely difficult.
Discuss some of the problems people living in cities face. How can government make urban life better for people?
You should write at least 250 words.

Sample Answer One:

This is an academic writing essay and when it comes to academic part of IELTS, you are lot more judged on your vocabulary, the kind of sentences you make, the relation that you are able to maintain between the paragraphs and then are you able to answer the question properly. So, keeping in mind all of these things, the first thing you should do before you start writing the essay and frame sentence and all of that, think about the points. This is a discuss type of an essay, so you are not required to just give the advantages, disadvantages and then neither are you supposed to favor anything. You need to merely discuss i.e. bring in the points that are possible, without bending down to either of the points.

Now, let us have a look at the points that could be framed for this essay. Make sure, you take 10 minutes or so to frame points Think about them, clearly and be sure of what you will be saying when you start framing sentences.

  1. Cost of living is much higher than in a small town or village.
  2. There are higher rates of crime in urban areas when compared to the rural ones.
  3. Pollution is a major problem in cities and often life in cities could be unhealthy and stressful.
  4. Government should invest in building affordable housing to reduce the cost of living.
  5. Proper strategy to ensure that traffic is under control.
  6. Development of provincial towns to ensure that there is less of pressure in major cities.

Now, once the points have been thought of, the next step is to move towards writing the essay. The academic essay should consist of at least 4 paragraphs. Out of these four, the first two are the opening and the ending while the other two are the ones in which the major content is put.(302 Words)

Sample Answer Two

Cities are where people dream. However, there could be certain drawbacks of living in large metropolis. In my opinion, government has a major role to play in improving the lifestyle at cities for the average inhabitant.

The main issue for people living in cities is the cost of living. Inhabitants of cities have to pay higher prices for housing, transport and even food. The other major problem with living in urban areas is the high rate of crime when compared to rural locations. Not only crime, there is an increased poverty leading to depression and high stress level. Furthermore, the air qualities in cities is often poor due to the pollution from traffic, and the streets are over crowded.

However, there are various steps that the government should take to tackle these problems. Firstly, investment in building affordable or social housing to reduce the cost of living. People living in cities have to live in localities that are not only unsafe but even unhealthy for living. Secondly, politicians should use their power to ban vehicles in cities and promote use of cleaner public transport. This will reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion. In Delhi, for example, the introduction of odd-even rule, i.e. cars with odd serial numbers can travel on certain days while even on others has helped to curb the traffic problem. A third option would be to develop provincial towns in rural areas, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities.

In conclusion, an unchecked migration of people from towns to cities is likely to increase pressure on major cities. Governments can certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all residents. (298 Words)

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