WRITING TASK 1: Line graph: Bird counts at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows the number of birds of different types sighted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary between 2001 and 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Sample Answer

The line graph provides information about how the numbers of three kinds of birds sighted at Bharatpur Bird Sanctuary changed over a period of 13 years (2001-2014).

Overall, it can be clearly observed that the numbers of all types of birds experienced a significant rise with time and flamingos recorded the highest count throughout the years.

In the year 2001, the numbers of kingfisher, black beak pelican and flamingo were 200, 1000 and 3000 respectively. After a span of 2 years the numbers of kingfisher experienced a slight growth and recorded at 500. In comparison, black beak pelican and flamingo figures rose considerably to 3000 and 5000 respectively.

In the year 2005, the count of kingfishers was 2500, while the other two species had significantly high totals. Over the course of next 3 years, flamingo counts leveled out at approximately 9000. The population of black beak pelican in the bird sanctuary saw a marginal decline in the same time period. Notably, kingfisher was the only species that showed an increase in numbers. In 2014, the numbers of flamingo were approximately 4500 more than that of black beak pelican and approximately 7500 higher as compared to kingfishers.

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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 – television viewing for sports by country

The table below shows the television viewing for sports by country, in millions for the current year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

Country Tennis Golf Motor racing Athletics
Australia 6.2 4.5 3.6 2
U.K 6.6 2.9 6.2 4.5
USA 7 11.7 1.4 8.9
Canada 6 2.6 1.2 3.9

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Sample Answer

The table provides information about the television viewing figures for 4 different kinds of sports in 4 countries for the year 2018.

It can be clearly seen that tennis is a popular sport in all the listed countries. It has viewing figures of 6.2 million in Australia, 6.6 million in the U.K, 7 million and 6 million in the USA and Canada respectively. Motor racing has the least amount of viewership overall except in the UK. It is the second most viewed sport in the UK after tennis.

Looking at athletics, 8.9 million Americans watch this sport in comparison to only 2 million Australians. Figures in U.K and Canada are nearly two times higher than that recorded in Australia. Notably, golf has the highest amount of viewership among all 4 given sports. America has 11.7 million people who enjoy watching golf. Australia comes a distant second with 4.5 million viewers. In comparison, fewer people in U.K and Canada watch this sport, 2.9 million and 2.6 million consecutively.

Overall, it can be observed that golf is the most popular sport in the USA while tennis is the most-watched sport in the other listed countries. (193 words)

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IELTS Essay # Children using video games

IELTS Writing problems solution type Essay # Children using video games

Many people today are worried about young children using video games. What problems might these games cause, for children and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced?

Sample Answer

The almost universal availability of video games among children has presented us with a number of challenges and decisions, none of which are straightforward. I believe there are three main problems associated with these products, and also three remedies we can adopt.
Perhaps the major problem we need to deal with is the level of violence found in these games. Many of them feature aggressive or warlike characters, ranging from soldiers to criminals and killers. This inevitably leads children to believe that such behaviour is normal, or even desirable. A second issue is the obsessive way that some children use the games – for example, preferring their computers to real friendships, making these children isolated and socially naïve. Finally, there are physical effects from excessive gaming, including eye strain, insomnia and damage to posture. These can be difficult to reverse once they have taken hold.
Turning to possible solutions, one key step would be to legislate more strictly to control the content of these games. They could, for instance, be reviewed by censors in the same way that films are. This would prevent unsuitable material influencing young minds. To tackle the problem of obsessive use, we could make more counselling and advice available through schools. On the subject of physical side effects, advice on safe use could be included as part of the packaging or even the game itself, so that youngsters are constantly aware of the risks.
To sum up, this is a problem that has both social and physical effects, and the solution will require combined action by manufacturers, schools and authorities.

 

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IELTS Essay about Consumer goods packaging

IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Some people say that supermarkets and manufacturers should reduce the amount of products which include lot of packaging. Others say that we should be responsible and avoid the products which have a lot of packaging.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
You should spend 40 minutes on this topic

Sample Answer

Large quantities of plastics are used in various forms in the packaging industry. Some sections of society believe that companies should limit the amount of plastics being used while others believe that individuals can make a difference by saying no to goods that require a lot of packaging. In the given paragraphs, I will discuss both the views before giving my opinion.

On one hand, manufacturing units should be made aware of the harmful effects of using packaging material on the environment. Plastic is the leading cause of pollution and the fact that it takes thousands of years to fully degrade in itself explains why its use should be regulated. The world is already witnessing environmental degradation and plastic is undoubtedly a major contributor. Majority of the plastic ends up in the world’s oceans and it has had detrimental effects on the marine life. From affecting the ecosystem to being responsible for extinction of species, we can say that, the effects of plastics on our environment are anything but positive.

On the other hand, consumers should take matters into their own hands and reduce the consumption of products which require more packaging. Moreover, less demands for such products will directly result in limited manufacturing and reduced sales. The use of plastics will also curtail significantly. Certainly, this will not only compel supermarkets and industries but also encourage them to make changes in their packaging policy.

To sum up, companies and individuals both are equally responsible for the excessive usage of plastics.  Users should be made aware of the catastrophic effects of this artificial material and statutory warning should be displayed on all such kinds of products. Manufacturers must also look for suitable alternatives. Limiting plastic consumption is the need of the hour and effective steps must be taken to curb this menace.

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